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I'm gonna write someting... @Kenny's correction

and I will stop writing for a while.

1. Three BEST things happend in the last ten days of my life.

* Finally I found my wallet, which I thought I had lost.
* I recieved letter that says I got 960 on some stupid Englsih test.
* I won the business contest in Beijing and NHK is having a programme about it, which will surely please my Mom hence makes me more financialy secure.

Well, actually I don't give a damn about these things. They are nothing, compared to the fabulous people I met in Beijin, my lost cell phone ....

I want to write about people who impressed me: Brilliant Chinese and Korea students, girls so attractive I crashed on, and the City of Bejing that both impressed and dissapointed me. This is what the article below. And this is the article on which I have to cease writing since I don't have much inspiration now.

Well, all I want you to know is, I found my wallet and lost my cellphone this time. I'm really in bad mood and I'm kind of busy now. How can I help with my bad performance in writing?

By the way, my agendas for the following two weeks are

+ Make up a crappy presentation about some M&A suggestion for my internship. It's a sort of homework.

+ Take a quick review on Japanese history and gography, for a quolification exam on TOUR GUIDE.

+ Hold an discussion about THE POSTAL DISSOLUTION(I'm not sure if I can translate this way) with my friends, and decide who to vote for next election on 11th Sep.

+ Prepare for a series of school exam which start on Sep. 1st.

+ Got to have a look at H.M.S. Pinafore. It's an Opera, or at least it sounds like some singing play to me. I have to see it at some point of my life since two of my most favorite works, The Simpsons and The West Wing have quoted it.



pinafore.jpg




So, this is why I got to stop writing. I've got to do all these tings while feeding myself, playing tennis, keeping my room, building up muscles and I have to stop writing.

See ya♪

  1. 2005/08/22(月) 03:31:29|
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ダンスもしろよ~ぅ!
  1. 2005/08/23(火) 17:01:38 |
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しますします♪
イノッチが増えたり減ったりします♪
  1. 2005/08/24(水) 00:13:05 |
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イノッチが増減??
イノッチは細胞か??
イノッチの○○が増えたり減ったりってこと??
  1. 2005/08/24(水) 09:58:52 |
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I'm gonna write someting...
and I will stop writing for a while.
//what does it mean?? "I will stop writing for a while"

1. Three BEST thing happend in the last ten days of my life.
// Three best things THAT happened ...

* Finally I found my purse, which I thought was lost.
//which I thought I had lost
//... was lost = person, hope etc, but not an object

* I recieved letter that says I got a stupid 960 points in some

stupid Englsih test.
//I got 960 on some stupid English test

* I won the business contest in Beijing and NHK seems to be

having a programme about that, which will surely please my Mom

hence makes me more financialy secured.
//NHK is having a program about it
//secured -> secure

But but but but, actually I don't give a damn to these things.

They are totally nothing, compared to the fabulous people I met

in Beijin, compared to my lost cell phone ....
//I'm sure u know, but in proper sentences, never use BUT at the

beginning
//I don't give a damn ABOUT these things
//They are nothing, no such thing as "totally nothing"
//parallel sturcture: don't repeat "compared"

I want to write about people who impressed me: The brilliant

Chinese and Korea students, the real girls who attracted me to

hell, and the City of Bejing that both impressed and

dissapointed me. This is what the article below. And this is the

article on which I have to cease writing since I don't have much

inspiration now.
//"the people"
//"the real girls"??
//"who attracted me to hell", no such expression


Well, all I want you to know is, I found my purse and lost my

cellphone.I'm in bad mood and I'm busy now. How can I help with

my bad performance?
//unless ur gay, u have a wallet, not a purse ;)
//I'm in A bad mood
//"my bad performance" -> "performance" implies ur performance

in bed


By the way, in following two weeks my agendas are
//my agenda for my following two weeks are
// agenda is single

+ Make up some crappy presentation about a M&A suggestion for

the internship. It's a homework.
//make up a crappy ...
//not sure if suggestion is the right word
//my internship, u haven't touched on ur internship until now

+ Take quick review on Japanese history and Geography, to take a

quolification exam on TOUR GUIDE on 4th Sep.
//quickly review jap. history and geo. for a quolification

exam..


+ Hold an discussion about THE POSTAL DISSOLUTION(I'm not sure

if I can translate this way) with my friend, and decide who to

vote on the next election 11th Sep.
//hold a discussion about the postal privatization
//who to vote for the next sep 11th election

+ Be prepared for School exams which start on Sep. 1st a little

by a little.
//Preparing little by little for ...


+ Got to have a look on H.M.S. Pinafore. It's an Opera, or at

least sounds like a singing play to me. I have to see it by some

point of my life since two of my most favorite works, The

Simpsons and The Westwing have quoted it.
//a look at
// It's an opera, at least it sounds like a singing play
// I have to see it at some point in my life
// two of my favorite programs

So, this is why I got to stop writing. I've got to do all these

tings while feeding myself, playing tennis, keeping my room,

building up muscles and I've got to stop writing.

//while feeding myself -> while earning a living
//the past i've got to stop writing is repetitive
See ya♪
  1. 2005/08/26(金) 13:30:53 |
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多!

さすがに公開添削は恥ずかしくなってくるかも!笑 
でもずいぶん手間かけてくれたね!一読して頷くところがたくさんあるし、反論したいところもある(が、俺がだれかに中国語を添削して反論されたら・・・と想像すると)さすがにおとなしく受け入れます。
いずれにしろこの多さはXマークをつけられただけじゃ直し方が分かんないところも多々あったろうね!笑

ありがとうケニ☆またよろしく。
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ちょーさんすげー。960って…
けにーさんもすげー。

//"my bad performance" -> "performance" implies ur performance in bed
うけたw
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